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EDIT: Fixed a few things

I have been working on this off and on ALL day. -dies-

But I really like how it turned out, and I finally did a decent lookin' background. xDD :woohoo:

Anyyywhoo, it's my Matty-pants playin' with a slobbery baseball 8DD LOL


And please critique! Cx Except on the back paws, I know they look funny, I had a real hard time on them. xC


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:iconjedidawg:
I love this! This has become a really big improvement!
I adore th eyes and cute little drowl face. >w<
Hmm,... first I'll take a look at the boxer. Everyhting is beautiful, but it looks like the neck isn't connected to to the head? Or is it the perspective? Another thing I see on the boxer is a skinny back leg XD Do you think that you can add some more meat to the back leg?
Now moving on to the background. Ok, why not make the grass look like it's going far into the distance? Try making the grass get smaller and smaller at the top.
That's all. I Luv this! It's too awesome!
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:iconthearticredfox:
asdh;ksdfs this is so cuteee *explodes*

i love this 8D i love the blues and purples in the sky and the lighting on the grass :) i actually like the paws, the lil toes are adorable xD

hmm the only things i can think of to crit would be the head & neck, they don't really look...connected? ^^; idk lol i suck at critique..and the highlights are a little strong in some areas |D really great job! keep up the great work Dial :D
:iconlanceythedog:
Dhawww this is so cute, Dial! Matty is adorable. c:
I love his pose and eyes, and the slobber on the ball is epic. xDD

The only crits I have is that the paws are a little big (maybe the back ones more than the front, but even then I don't know if you wanted them to look that way xD) and the body looks a bit misshapen. If you look from where the line of his belly is to his back, it looks a bit to wide, and boxers are supposed to be very lean.

Hope that helps! (:

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:iconblue2volf:
How come this came to my messages _?
*The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork*

Anyways Great background nice idea everything is nice but not the postion of eyes.They loooking so up high just saying no offence.Nice talents you got btw.

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Yea thats my name you needed something friend?
:iconpeanuttehwolfhound:
Lol I have no idea xC

But thanks! xDD n___n
:iconblue2volf:
Your pretty famous I saw that cute faced avatar so many times around but I didnt talk with you face to face until this message came to me.
Divine Intervention ?

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STALKER !!!!
Yea thats my name you needed something friend?
:icone-xotique:
Aw how cute :D Reminds me of one of my dogs :p
:iconpeanuttehwolfhound:
Lol thanks! xD n__n

Oh wow I just noticed that neck thing, idk what happened there xC But thanks for pointin' that out! Cx
:iconpeanuttehwolfhound:
Aww thanks Lanceyy! xDD n__n

Oh yeah your right, I had a hard time doin this pose ^^;

It did, thanks! 8DD

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